I want something eye catching that will make a reader want to know more about the story. The synopsis is as follows.
Daniel is an ‘ordinary Joe’. He has a job as a waiter in his brother’s restaurant. He resents his brother’s success, and wants desperately to be like him. Daniel’s insecurity results in him playing out a fantasy that he is the successful businessman. Daniel is manipulative, and needs to be in control of at least one part of his life, so in relationships, he has to be the dominant one.
Clare is a young woman who is overweight, plain looking, and convinced that because of all this, a love life will never come her way. Her older sister Emily has always taken on the role of her guardian. They have a bond that they consider will always be un-breakable, no matter what path their lives take.
When Clare meets Daniel, her whole world is turned upside down. Daniel offers everything that Clare has ever wished for. He is good looking, charismatic, and appears to be successful. Emily knows by his behaviour, that something is not quite right about Daniel. He is a control freak, who is taking advantage of Clare’s lack of self esteem. As Clare’s infatuation with Daniel becomes stronger, the bond between the two sisters is in danger of being shattered, and Emily has to fight to make Clare see the truth behind Daniel’s façade. When Emily tells Daniel that she has found out who he really is, he has to take drastic steps to get her out of their lives, for good.