We like the text and name. but need the "silhouette" to be more defined and smooth. The castles should idealy span the entire width of the word "new castle as well". We like this style here as well: http://satreatments.com/images/logo.jpg
We want the "turrets" on each side, and then a nice bridge between the two, the turrets should have some windows, and design accents. See pictures of turrets we liked here: http://imgur.com/IqfUG
The turrets / silhouette should contain some "Detail" but still be subtle.
Again the design above the words should be subtle like you see in the spa logo.
Feel free to try different text as well if you would like.