Credit Repair Service - Redesign 1 Page

Score More Credit

My name is Brian Diez and I'm the CEO of Score More Credit, a credit repair service based out of Long Island, NY.

I was a stockbroker until 9/11, when I decided a life of making money wasn't as meaningful as a life of making money AND changing lives. I've been helping people one at a time ever since. My latest endeavor is my new credit repair service.

With the economy what it is people need their credit now more than ever. I wipe away the inaccuracies and give them a fighting chance to get back on their feet.

I would truly love to offer more for the project, but my company is still a start up, financed by my savings and credit cards. I regularly compete with corporations who have millions to spend on advertising. Guerrillas like me have to do more with less. That said, the winner will get the landing and thank you page as well, for an additional fee.

Bottom line is I need a CPA pitch page that converts if I'm going to compete with the big boys.

Male or female ages 25-65. Families or single. Income range is $45K and up. 50/50 mix of college and no college. Many of my clients need credit to buy a home, get a car, or for employment purposes. Some need security clearance and others are wealthy investors. I even have NBA players and divas, though I can't disclose who. I get real results and word travels fast.

So here's the deal. Credit repair is a crazy competitive market. The biggest problem is overcoming the whole "credit repair internet scam" stigma. I do a decent job of that with my testimonials. For PPC, this works just fine since they're looking for a solution. For CPA traffic, which may be banners or email solicitation, its not good enough. They need to see a site that INSPIRES CREDIBILITY.

The site should be graphic heavy and lead the eye to request a free credit review with a big fat arrow. Here's my sample page with the items you have to work with: http://www.Get700Score.com/_welcome.htm

I plan on adding a chat box which doesn't appear there now.

The video should be the focal point on landing. The rest serves to enhance credibility.

I'm open to suggestion, but will tend to favor tested CPA offer style templates.

Just pretend the prospect has the attention span of an 8 year old.

I have images of my logo, my guarantee certificate, my signature, and myself attached.